Task 1~20 minutes · at least 150 words
The pie charts below show the proportion of workers employed in six sectors of the economy in one country in 1980 and 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
Share of the workforce employed in each sector (%) 1980 2020 34%27%8%13%12%6% 9%14%7%19%23%28% Agriculture, forestry and fishingManufacturingConstructionRetail and hospitalityPublic services (health, education, government)Finance and business services
Your answer (Task 1)
Band 9 model answer (180 words, counted)

The two pie charts compare the share of the workforce employed in six economic sectors in one country in 1980 and 2020.

Overall, the economy shifted decisively away from agriculture and manufacturing towards services. Whereas farming and factory work together accounted for most jobs in 1980, the service sectors dominated employment four decades later, and only construction remained broadly stable.

In 1980, agriculture, forestry and fishing formed the largest sector, providing 34% of all jobs, followed by manufacturing at 27%. By 2020, however, the agricultural share had collapsed to just 9%, roughly a quarter of its earlier level, while manufacturing had almost halved to 14%.

The service industries expanded correspondingly. Finance and business services saw the most dramatic growth, rising from a mere 6% to 28% and becoming the biggest employer of all. Public services, which include health and education, almost doubled from 12% to 23%, and retail and hospitality also grew, from 13% to 19%. Construction, by contrast, changed very little, slipping from 8% to 7%, so that it remained one of the two smallest sectors in both years.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Achievement: Did your overview describe the overall shift (from farming and factories to services, construction stable) without figures, and did you report the key percentages accurately?
  • Coherence: Did you group the shrinking sectors and the growing sectors, comparing 1980 with 2020 for each group, rather than describing one whole pie and then the other?
  • Lexical Resource: Did you vary proportion language (accounted for, a quarter of, almost halved, almost doubled, a mere 6%) and avoid repeating "percent of workers"?
  • Grammar: Past simple for each year and past perfect for change by 2020 (had collapsed, had almost halved), with accurate comparatives and relative clauses?
Task 2~40 minutes · at least 250 words
Write about the following topic:In many large cities, house prices and rents have risen so quickly that people on average incomes can no longer afford to live there.
What are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Your answer (Task 2)
Band 9 model answer (305 words, counted)

In many of the world’s major cities, the cost of buying or renting a home has risen far faster than wages, so that teachers, nurses and other ordinary workers are being priced out. This problem has several causes, but it can be eased through a combination of planning reform and public investment.

The most fundamental cause is a mismatch between supply and demand. Successful cities attract employers and therefore newcomers, yet the construction of new homes rarely keeps pace, often because planning rules are slow and restrictive or because suitable land is scarce. A second factor is that housing has increasingly become an investment rather than simply a place to live. Wealthy buyers, both domestic and foreign, purchase properties to profit from rising prices or to let them as short-term holiday rentals, which removes homes from the market for local residents. Long periods of cheap borrowing have encouraged this speculation further.

Tackling the problem requires action on both fronts. First, governments should make it easier to build, for example by speeding up planning decisions, permitting taller buildings near transport links and converting empty offices into flats. Secondly, they can expand the supply of affordable homes directly, either by funding social housing, as Vienna has done successfully for decades, or by requiring developers to include a proportion of low-cost units in every large project. Finally, the speculative side of the market can be curbed through higher taxes on empty or second homes and tighter limits on short-term letting.

None of these measures will work overnight, and each carries political costs, since existing homeowners often oppose new development near them. Nevertheless, a city in which only the wealthy can live will eventually struggle to staff its schools, hospitals and businesses. Making housing affordable is therefore not only a matter of fairness but also of long-term economic survival.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Response: Did you answer BOTH questions — the causes AND the solutions — and does each solution clearly match a cause you explained?
  • Coherence: One body paragraph for causes and one for solutions, each idea introduced with clear signposts (The most fundamental cause…, A second factor…, First…, Secondly…, Finally…)?
  • Lexical Resource: Precise topic vocabulary (priced out, supply and demand, speculation, social housing, curbed) with the prompt paraphrased?
  • Grammar: A range of complex structures (so … that, passives, relative clauses, either … or) with few errors? Did you reach 250+ words?