Task 1~20 minutes · at least 150 words
The diagram below shows how natural rubber is produced from latex, the milky liquid that flows from rubber trees when the bark is cut.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
The production of natural rubber 1diagonal cut made inthe bark at dawn2latex collected fromthe cup after 4 hours3poured through a sieveto remove dirt and barkwateracid4mixed with water anda weak acid in tanks5sets into soft slabs(12–18 hours)6squeezed between rollersinto 3 mm sheets7sheets washedwith clean water8dried in a smokehouse(60°C, 4 days)9sheets inspectedand graded 10 111 kg pressed into 111 kg balesand exported to factories(tyres, gloves) shredded into crumbrubber for lower-valuegoods (e.g. floor mats) highgradelow grade
Your answer (Task 1)
Band 9 model answer (192 words, counted)

The diagram illustrates the process by which natural rubber is obtained from rubber trees and prepared for sale to manufacturers.

Overall, there are ten main stages, beginning with the collection of liquid latex from the trees and ending with the export of finished bales. The process also includes a quality check that divides the rubber into two grades.

First, a diagonal cut is made in the bark of each tree at dawn, so that latex runs down into a cup, from which it is collected four hours later. The liquid is then poured through a sieve to remove dirt and bark, after which it is mixed with water and a weak acid in tanks. Over a period of 12 to 18 hours, the mixture gradually sets into soft slabs.

These slabs are squeezed between rollers into sheets 3 millimetres thick, washed and then dried in a smokehouse at 60°C for four days. Once dry, the sheets are inspected and graded. Low-grade sheets are shredded into crumb rubber for less valuable goods such as floor mats, whereas high-grade sheets are pressed into 111-kilogram bales and exported to factories that make tyres and gloves.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Achievement: Did your overview give the number of stages, where the process starts and ends, and mention the split into two grades — without any details yet? Did you include the figures shown (4 hours, 12–18 hours, 3 mm, 60°C, 4 days, 111 kg) without inventing anything?
  • Coherence: Did you describe the stages in the correct order with varied sequencers (First, then, after which, Over a period of, Once dry), and handle the branch at the end clearly?
  • Lexical Resource: Did you paraphrase the labels rather than copy them (poured through a sieve → strained; sets → solidifies) and use precise process verbs?
  • Grammar: Did you use the present simple passive accurately throughout (is collected, are squeezed, are graded), with some relative and time clauses?
Task 2~40 minutes · at least 250 words
Write about the following topic:Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think there are better ways of reducing crime, such as education and job training.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Your answer (Task 2)
Band 9 model answer (301 words, counted)

Crime is a concern in every society, but there is little agreement on how best to reduce it. Some people favour longer prison sentences, whereas others believe that education and job training achieve more. In my view, although prison has an essential role, education and training are the more effective long-term solution.

Supporters of tougher sentences have a clear logic. An offender who is in prison cannot commit further crimes against the public, so longer terms directly reduce offending for as long as they last. Severe penalties may also deter potential criminals, who must weigh the risk of losing many years of freedom. In addition, for serious violent offences, a long sentence reflects society’s sense of justice and shows victims that the harm done to them has been taken seriously.

Nevertheless, prison on its own does little to address why people break the law. Many offenders come from backgrounds of poverty, poor schooling and unemployment, and a spell behind bars changes none of these circumstances; indeed, prison can strengthen links with other criminals and make honest work even harder to find afterwards. Education and vocational training tackle these root causes. Prisoners who gain qualifications or a trade have a realistic alternative to crime on release, and such programmes generally cost far less than keeping someone locked up year after year. Investment in schools and youth services in deprived areas can also stop young people drifting into crime in the first place.

On balance, I believe the two approaches should complement each other, with the emphasis firmly on education. Dangerous individuals must be removed from society to protect the public, but for most offenders, a longer sentence merely postpones the next crime. Giving people the skills to build a lawful life is, in the end, the surest way to make communities safer.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Response: Did you discuss both views fully, in separate paragraphs, and give a clear opinion that you kept from the introduction to the conclusion?
  • Coherence: One main idea per paragraph, with clear topic sentences and linking (Supporters of…, Nevertheless, On balance)?
  • Lexical Resource: A range of precise vocabulary (deter, offender, vocational training, root causes, deprived areas), used naturally rather than forced?
  • Grammar: A mix of complex sentence types (relative clauses, concession, the semicolon to link related ideas) with few errors? Did you reach 250+ words?