Task 1~20 minutes · at least 150 words
The maps below show a former military airfield at Hollins Down in 1975 and the same site today.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
Hollins Down airfield — 1975 Hollins Down — today farmlandpondwoodlandmain roadmain gateperimeter roadNrunwayshangarscontrol towerbarracks hutsfuel depot farmlandpondwoodlandmain roadmain gateperimeter roadNwildflower meadownew woodlandgliding clubfilm studioscafé / visitor centrehotelPcar parknew access road
Your answer (Task 1)
Band 9 model answer (194 words, counted)

The maps compare a former military airfield at Hollins Down in 1975 with the same site today.

Overall, the airfield has been transformed from a military installation into a centre for leisure, tourism and film-making, with much of its paved surface returned to nature. The perimeter road, the main gate, the woodland, the pond and the farmland in the south-east, however, are unchanged.

The most noticeable changes concern the runways. The shorter one, which ran from north-west to south-east, has been removed, and trees have been planted along most of its route. Only the eastern half of the main runway remains, now used by a gliding club, while the western half has become a wildflower meadow.

The buildings have also been given new purposes. The three hangars in the south have been converted into film studios, with a fourth, larger studio added beside them. The control tower now houses a café and visitor centre, and the barracks huts in the north-west have been demolished to make way for a hotel. In the south-east, the fuel depot has been replaced by a car park. Finally, a new access road has been built from the north.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Achievement: Did your overview sum up the big picture (military site → leisure, tourism and film; paved areas returned to nature; what stayed the same) without listing every change? Did you cover all the main changes — both runways, the new uses of the four older buildings, the extra studio and the new road — without inventing any?
  • Coherence: Did you group the changes logically (the runways / the buildings / access) rather than jumping around the map?
  • Lexical Resource: Did you vary your "change" vocabulary — removed, planted, converted into, demolished to make way for, replaced by, has become — and use accurate location language (in the north-west, from north-west to south-east, the eastern half)?
  • Grammar: Did you use the present perfect passive accurately (has been removed, have been converted), since the second map shows the present day, and the past simple only for 1975 (which ran from…)?
Task 2~40 minutes · at least 250 words
Write about the following topic:In many cities, the number of surveillance cameras in streets, stations and other public places has increased greatly, and some of these cameras can now automatically identify the faces of passers-by.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Your answer (Task 2)
Band 9 model answer (298 words, counted)

Surveillance cameras have become a familiar feature of city life, and the latest systems can not only record what happens in a street but also recognise who is there. Although this technology undoubtedly helps to keep people safe, I believe that its disadvantages, above all for personal freedom, now outweigh its benefits.

The case for cameras is easy to understand. Recorded footage allows the police to establish what happened after an assault or a road accident, and it often provides more reliable evidence than the memory of a frightened witness. Visible cameras may also discourage minor offences such as vandalism on trains, and they help many people, especially those travelling alone at night, to feel more secure. Face-recognition systems promise to go further still, by locating a missing child or a wanted suspect in a crowd within minutes rather than days.

However, the ability to identify people automatically changes the nature of surveillance. A camera that merely records is checked only when something has gone wrong, whereas a system that recognises faces can build a continuous record of where every citizen goes, whom they meet and which meetings or protests they attend. Such information is extremely valuable to anyone who wishes to control a population, and powers introduced for one purpose are frequently extended to others. Even in democracies, people who know they are being watched may avoid activities that are lawful but unpopular, which quietly weakens public life. Large collections of facial images can also be stolen or misused.

On balance, therefore, I regard the spread of identifying cameras as more harmful than beneficial. Most of their genuine advantages could be kept if the law confined them to serious crimes under independent supervision, but without such limits, the price paid in privacy and liberty is too high.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Response: Did you weigh the advantages against the disadvantages and state clearly which side is greater — in the introduction AND the conclusion (here: the disadvantages, because of the threat to privacy and freedom)?
  • Coherence: One clear purpose per body paragraph (benefits / drawbacks), linked with signposts such as The case for cameras…, However…, On balance…?
  • Lexical Resource: Precise topic vocabulary (surveillance, footage, a continuous record, lawful but unpopular, independent supervision) used naturally, with the prompt’s words paraphrased?
  • Grammar: A range of complex structures (not only … but also, relative clauses, whereas, conditionals) with few errors? Did you reach 250+ words?