Task 1~20 minutes · at least 150 words
The diagram below shows the stages in the production of olive oil.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
The production of olive oil 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 olives picked(October–December) taken to the millwithin 24 hours leaves removed;olives washed crushed intoa paste mixed slowly(30–45 minutes) centrifuge separatesoil from water + solids oil left to settlein steel tanks filtered andbottled solid waste (pomace) → animal feed or fuel
Your answer (Task 1)
Band 9 model answer (189 words, counted)

The diagram illustrates how olive oil is produced, from the harvesting of the fruit to the finished bottled product.

Overall, the process consists of eight main stages, beginning with the picking of the fruit and continuing at a mill, where the olives are cleaned, broken down and separated before the oil is stored and packaged. The process also generates a solid by-product, which is put to practical use rather than wasted.

First, the olives are picked between October and December and are transported to the mill within 24 hours. On arrival, any leaves are removed and the fruit is washed in water. The clean olives are then crushed into a paste, which is mixed slowly for a period of between 30 and 45 minutes.

At the next stage, the paste is fed into a centrifuge, which separates the oil from the water and solid material. This solid waste, known as pomace, is not discarded but is used either to feed animals or as fuel. The oil itself, meanwhile, is transferred to steel tanks and left to settle. In the final stage, it is filtered and then poured into bottles.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Achievement: Did your overview state the number of stages, where the process starts and ends, and mention the by-product — without any details yet? Did you include the times shown (October–December, 24 hours, 30–45 minutes) without inventing anything?
  • Coherence: Did you describe every stage in the correct order, using sequencers (First, On arrival, then, At the next stage, Meanwhile, Finally)?
  • Lexical Resource: Did you paraphrase the labels (picked → harvested, taken → transported, left to settle) rather than copying them?
  • Grammar: Did you use the present simple passive correctly throughout (are picked, is washed, is fed into), plus a relative clause or two?
Task 2~40 minutes · at least 250 words
Write about the following topic:In many countries, more households than ever before now keep a pet, and owners are spending increasing amounts of money on their animals’ food, health care and accessories.
Why is this happening? What effects does this trend have on society?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Your answer (Task 2)
Band 9 model answer (305 words, counted)

In many countries, pets are now treated less as working animals or guards than as members of the family, and spending on them has grown accordingly. This shift has both economic and cultural causes, and its consequences for society are partly beneficial and partly troubling.

Two main forces lie behind the trend. The first is rising disposable income: as households have become wealthier, they can afford not only an animal but also premium food, insurance and veterinary treatment that would once have seemed extravagant. The second is a change in attitudes. Many people, especially in busy cities where contact with neighbours is limited, value a dog or cat as a source of companionship and daily routine, and a vast pet industry reinforces this view through advertising and social media.

Some of the effects are clearly positive. Caring for an animal gives owners a sense of purpose and a reason to be active, and research has consistently linked dog ownership with higher levels of physical activity. The pet economy also supports a large number of jobs, from veterinary nurses to groomers and specialist retailers.

On the other hand, the trend creates costs that the wider community has to bear. Animals bought on impulse are frequently abandoned once their owners realise how much time and money they require, placing a heavy burden on rescue shelters. In addition, the sheer number of pets has an environmental impact: domestic cats kill large numbers of wild birds, and meat-based pet food adds noticeably to the carbon footprint of agriculture.

In conclusion, people are keeping more pets, and spending more on them, mainly because they can afford to and because they now value animals as companions. While this brings real benefits for health and employment, societies need to discourage impulsive purchases and take the ecological cost of so many animals seriously.

✅ Self-assessment — mark yourself honestly
  • Task Response: Did you answer BOTH questions — why pet ownership and spending are rising AND what effects this has on society — giving each a fully developed paragraph (or two), rather than spending most of the essay on one of them?
  • Coherence: Is each body paragraph built around one purpose (causes / positive effects / negative effects), with clear topic sentences and linking (Two main forces…, The first… The second…, On the other hand…, In addition…)?
  • Lexical Resource: Precise vocabulary (disposable income, companionship, bought on impulse, abandoned, rescue shelters, carbon footprint) with the prompt paraphrased, not copied?
  • Grammar: A range of complex sentences (time clauses with as / once / when, relative clauses with where / that, not only … but also) with few errors? Did you reach 250+ words?